英语⼀英文翻译：我已得到peter的入职日期为10月8日，如果你认为这个日期可以，我就给她发送入职邮件。

我已得到peter的入职日期为10月8日，如果你认为这个日期可以，我就给她发送入职邮件。期待你的答复，谢谢。

I've been told that Peter's starting date is October 8th. If you have no problem with this date, then I will send him a new hire mail with this information.

Looking forward to your response.

Thanks,
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To whom it may concern:(信的开头）

我已得到peter的入职日期为10月8日

I have already recieved the entry date for Peter stated 8th of October.

如果你认为这个日期可以，我就给她发送入职邮件。

I will send an entry mail to him if you approve the stated date.

期待你的答复

Hope to hear from you soon.

谢谢
Thanks,

希望能帮的上忙哦:)

I have been noted Peter the entry date is October 8, if you think that this date can, I will give her to send recruits mail.

I've known that Peter's entry date is October 8th, if you think it is OK I will send her the entry email. Look forward to your reply. Thank you.